literature

Just Set Me Free

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When i first saw your comforting presense,
I knew that we were destined from above,
Realizing that you were the one for me,
Now knowing the true deffinition of love.

The sky is our limit,
Take my hand and let us be,
Sweep me away from this waiting game,
Bring me back to my reality.

Just set me free.

How long do i have to suffer,
The pain is too overwhelming for me,
Why are you making me think that you are interested,
Why can't you just see?

Just set me free.

This tease was just a game to you,
Though for months i tried to get over it, with all of my might,
With my efforts finally ending with a tunnel coming toward me,
A entrance full of heavenly light.

I am free.
This is a poem i wrote last night. I won't tell you what happened at the end, i would like to see if you know it, to see if i have explained it enough.
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MusicShadow's avatar
You dont need to explain anything, its fun to confuse people:), but it's a lovely poem. Did they die at the end?